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see but be not at sea

Perhaps as it seems

we shall have to go
ahead of thee
to welcome yee
into the folds of eternity
where you will not be
found as wanting

the universe has a larger purse
that the earth can boast of
and fellowmen
I have been watching sincerely
that your days on mommy Earth
are more heavenly.....

you may not be as happy
when in the arms
of times unknown wild wilderness
hope you all do know it...

so stay as long as you can
recognise me
a long way we all have yet to see
so be not at sea!
remain happy and friendly

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How happy we shall be is always determined of how good
are your deeds.
but those are only my beliefs


Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

Follow me

lesser undiscovered
even if one
reads us
we all feel happy
isn't it?

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One of your better pieces,
see/sea it was really good to be part of our family.
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

alone constitute my family
jess has gone with the wind i see
raj is in Canada enjoying Chinese feed
who else and yes
Alid is busy....
with his own poetry

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