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On a dark, gloopy, Anti-Matter Planet (AMP)
Oscillating in an alternate universe,
A Judicial Provost (JP) from the Department for Artistic Development (DAD)
Described one aspiring laureate as a “pontificating twiddler”.
Another poet he described as a “pretext for a prig”.
The Judicial Provost praised Wordless, Shakenwords and Jon Wood Knot.
He lambasted free verse and decried Wallace Whitwoman and Esmerald Tonne.
He spewed upon contemporary verse,
In all its manifest forms.
How do pointed pogroms,
Pounding like jack hammers
On innocent pencillers,
Gain power to start their metaphoric massacres?
On AMP, the unthinkable is made manifest, and avant garde thoughts
Are treasonable.
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Thu, 2024-04-25 06:10
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