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Old Graves

It's hard to see everyone else moving on
Singing songs about healing old wounds and covering old scars long forgotten
When you're still left at the bottom of the grave you dug
So many years ago
I'll walk with you into that 'better place'
Just remember I have to say goodbye at the door
Because I haven't crawled out from this pit just yet.

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Comments

that you were actively editing, because this speaks to me. ~ Geezer.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

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Raywhitakerblog.wordpress.com
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Hiya, Coop.

Dig upward mate.

I've a feeling that you're going to relieve your bladder and piss off after this poem,
hope you don't though, its good!

Obi.

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