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Oh Impertinent Life

Well I will answer two most pertinent Questions.(Answers all seek)

Qs 1.
“Why Me?” ...

what is happening
to your neighbour
they could be in a position worse
YEAH curse!!!!.
you will never know.

Just remember
we all come with our own kind of disease/MALADY
with much sore numbers
ask another Lady....

Qs 2.
“What is One's Purpose in Life?

In REALITY know this please
there is no known

At least I so feel
except that we all are born
after conjugation
of two successful ones
and to further succeed in our own existence
try and make your life more purposeful
Bang at night with a licensed one
or visit a ONE NIGHT FREE open STAND
where two minded can each other
at least the whole night withstand
else hold mine and I will yours'
shake hands and part
as if the two had played no part
ere the night departs
you depart
go home and light a candle
smell roses and perfumes
before your minds aberrations
cause about a doom
boom boom boom....
you will smile and gloom

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very great.


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reads to me like a performance poem in the current style and shape. Good for you!
Have you read this aloud? I have been seeing some modern, (millennial I dare say) readings lately at the coffeehouses and bars that do open mikes, and there are many in my area of DC. Your poem is right there! Boom boom boom!

I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

Great write.


I'd not considered it until reading these comments that maybe a lot of your poetry would be better appreciated as spoken word."there is no known purpose for life" very powerful.........stan

you are my master
this was composed as a reply to some one's question
here on neopoet

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