and should consider Pounds famous poem about Whitman. After despising Whitman he matures and finds that there is poetry in Whitman, and ends "let there be commerce between us."
As I mentioned in a different post, you can be Minniver Cheevy, but in the end the world does change.
There is a very serious literary philosophy and criticism in the 20th century about the major poets of that century which have changed poetry, as Mozart would change Scarlatti or Monet would change Courbet. The 20th century poets whom the vast majority of your peers acknowledge as masters those who expressed their times and created new forms of modern expression. They are not in your court. I don't think anyone on this site is on your court. But we still enjoy your poems.
How is it we can enjoy your poem and this poem, for different reasons. Like what you get out of Bach, and what you get out of Mahler...or charlie Parker.

I personally do not prefer "abstract poetry", if here is no clear narrative to engage me. The poem you are referring to is not abstract. It plays with words in a fresh way to describe the perpetual continuum of our lives. I would consider doing a course, modern poetry 101, and you never know, you might find commerce with it. The worst thing that can happen is...you don't.

love this

i guess this poem was your way to see if it receives the appreciation the sample poem to find syntax errors was put up by Kelsey...lol...
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Yes, the sarcasm. :)