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No hole in truth

you have murderous tendencies do you

you killed a fly where as you could have shared ...
she could have been served...
on the news paper
with which you killed her

sections one to five
will be held against you ...
where ever are you...
only one call is due to you.....

call your legal advisor....

if all humans kill flies
then how will we all fly ...
no lies
flies have big eyes...
they can be used as spies ..

friends take care
when you kill a fly ...

but the judge will exonerate you...
as you spoke the truth...

there's no hole
in your truth!

Hello Jess where r u?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I love it!


a cup of tea
rather a glass full

with two kettles whistling
free tea for you

debit to ur credit card
that will surely dooodo

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One of those pieces Jess would love to read a good write young Bard, sections one to five, would be better than numbers if you mindeth not using words.
Take care young man, walking with you as always,
Yours, Ian

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

not how??

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