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NEO TWINS Holding Hands Still

we two have seen
and been
here together since eons
all neopoets by now know
me small bard and critic Ian
are non congenital twins
of poetry
let us begin and regrin

just tell me how many read me
no damn comments are needed

I have surfed far too long
in turbulent wavy oceans
none can be braver
in more sterner commotions

like being kicked around
as a football
a machine gun poet
I was

But see I thank many Neo--- eee
for the brass polishing of my poetry
so many now look up to me

Ian along side me
you and Irene be
see not many from Neo
will ever flee
let them all compose as many poetry
a poet is a poet- tree
Why curb one's quantity
quality will come
but gradually

I reduced from 9 daily
to one a day
now off and on
post here I may

now you all
have your say

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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May I use these words on Instagram to promote Neopoet.
I thank many Neo--- eee
for the brass polishing of my poetry


all yours Lovedly bows

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