The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem effectively utilizes nostalgia and a sense of loss to evoke emotion in the reader. The vivid imagery of the old town and its changes over time is a strong point. However, the poem could benefit from more varied sentence structure and rhythm to enhance its musicality and flow.

In terms of structure, the poem maintains a consistent rhyme scheme, which is commendable. However, the meter seems to fluctuate, making the rhythm feel a bit disjointed at times. For example, the line "The siren that at noon each day" is noticeably longer than the other lines in its stanza. Adjusting the syllable count to create a more consistent rhythm could improve the poem's flow.

The poem's theme of change and the passage of time is clear and relatable, but the language could be more nuanced. The use of clichés such as "the good old days" and "you never can go home" detracts from the poem's originality. Experimenting with more unique and unexpected language could make the poem more engaging and memorable.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from exploring the speaker's emotions in more depth. While it's clear that the speaker feels a sense of loss, further exploration of these feelings could add depth to the poem and make the speaker's experience more relatable to the reader. For example, the speaker could reflect on specific memories associated with the town, or describe their feelings upon seeing the changes in more detail.

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Hello, William,
I feel the mood of your poem. I made the mistake of visiting the homes of my long gone grandparents and old neighborhoods. All changed. Even the area where I live now rapidly changes. It's very hard to go back, it can be very sad. Your poem captures the reality many (probably most) people experience when returning to neighborhoods and towns of their youth. Thank you for this.
L