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My Momma's Spagetti

Submitted by Dreamer of the ... on Fri, 2012-07-13 16:28

Spagetti, Spagetti

the best meal of all ,

with big meat balls, 

and noodles so tall,

tomato sauce,

pepper and salt,

then i dropped my plate,

oops! my fault!

Last few words: 
I made this up in 7th grade as an last minute project in language arts. Its retarded and silly, i know. But my teacher really enjoyed it for some insane reason. Now i'm in high school and sometimes i catch myself singing the poem...i guess its catchy.
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Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Fri, 2012-07-13 18:10

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Firstly welcome to Neopoet site and I hope all will look after you here.
It can be hard sometimes, my Grand Daughter has written on this site and there are workshops on going so ask for help with one of the poets that run the workshops they should be able to give you the best there is.
Lovely little ditty there, I hope to see more of your work as soon as, Yours Ian.T

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weirdelf

Fri, 2012-07-13 23:57

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It's good to be retarded and silly, in Australia we a have a saying "dags have more fun".

I do, however, look forward to seeing what else you can do,

cheers,
Jess
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judyanne

Sat, 2012-07-14 05:58

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welcome to neopoet
love judy
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Rula

Sat, 2012-07-14 07:43

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Hope you are good at cooking same as poetry..lol
enjoyed it ..Welcome to Neopoet.

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Geezer

Mon, 2012-07-16 09:50

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of a time long ago, when I had this very experience.
Sometimes we just don't know when anything might be something.
Welcome to Neo. As Ian says; there are many here who will help and encourage you.
Please take advantage of all the fine poets here to advance your goals.
Looking forward to seeing more. ~ Geezer

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