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My Love (Sunku)

Feelings
Felt anew
Born of the wind

Trusting
Touch inside
Time no obstacle

Drifting
Love tasted
Forever joined..

As always Sparrow in Spring..

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words: 
At Home now and just playing..
Editing stage: 

Comments

Love the flow love felt

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Many thanks for your visit, it gave me a lift.
Hope you are OK out there,
Take care love as always ,
Yours Ian. xx

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

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Glad I could help. I get a lift from you also

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