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In my head

I'm begging, please, get out from my head!
It's time I feel like the deadest of the dead...
And I know that right now I'm going down
Like a king, who is losing his golden crown;
But my heart is still beating, yes, I'm alive
Besides in my back there is big and sharp knife;
There are people around with masks on the faces
And everyone tries just to win the life races...
Well, I hope that my life won't come to the end
Till all is done and I can all understand.
I believe that I won't be forgotten by you all -
I just want to stay alive in your mind and soul.

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Thank you!

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Welcome Anna! You are with friends here, and our thoughts are with you and yours during this terrible time for Ukraine. We are happy to have you here as part of our community. Please be safe and keep writing.

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Michael Anthony

Thank you so much for your kind words!

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nice to meet you! I will light a white candle for your safety. hang in there!

*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Thank you,Cat!

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I am looking forward to reading more of your work. I imagine that it has taken quite an effort to make contact from your city at this time. We are an international community of poets and poetry lovers.

There a select few of us that have written about your country’s plight. Please look around The Stream should you want to see how much has been written.

I personally welcome you!

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Thank you Ray!
I will look around The Stream!

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welcome. i promise i will not forget you. ever. we are with you. hoping our president will do more. do what yours asks. you are our heroes. we in usa are watching many of our freedoms being taken away. not like yours. may peace come soon.

Thank you Cathy! I really appreciate your support !

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