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My Favorite Cookie

Submitted by Hon on Wed, 2024-04-10 18:14

A delicious taste of the
oatmeal raisin cookie
intrigue as a favorite kind
indulge in a hungry craving
for a sweet tooth of desire
from a grandma’s baking
permeate kitchen stage
fills with emotional display
that comes with a wide
an array of special
made for a guest's visit
A cup of chocolate milk
given add to a perfect match
for the lunch snack treat
at the spending moment
It embraces the heart with joy
elated smile put on a face
a lullaby song to play
with a rejoicing of celebrating
of a story-telling time memory
from a family holiday tradition

Style / type: 
Free verse
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
04/24 My Favorite Cookie
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content
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Thu, 2024-04-11 00:20

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Lavender

Wed, 2024-04-10 22:48

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Hello, Hon,
Many tender "sweet" memories here, and all centered around a favorite cookie - baked by Grandma. (I'd love to know what kind it is.) The final two lines are very heart-warming and add a extra nice touch to the feeling in the poem.
Thank you!
L

Hon

Thu, 2024-04-11 03:12

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Hi, lavender thank you I have made a minor change to add about my favorite cookie.
Thank you

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Lavender

Thu, 2024-04-11 14:03

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Adds so much to the imagery and warm feeling of appreciation in the poem! Very nice!
Thank you,
L

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