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MY EMOTIONS
Don't try to tickle me
my emotions are enough
to shed trickles down my cheeks
For years I have controlled myself
why should we depend on others
yet
Emotion by itself is a lubrication
it helps memories to escape quickly
Use yours instantly
lest like me one day
if not today
some day
you may need me
Then sadly enough
dry and drained
no emotion left in my veins
Till then just wait and see
where
you will
and
I shall be
maybe
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Emotion is the best of all lubrications
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Mon, 2022-08-01 17:59
Emotional oil...
lubricates the life-blood! Keeps the heart pumping and makes for easy living.
~ Geez.
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lovedly
Mon, 2022-08-01 18:21
ha ha Geeez
this poem was born from neopoet's poetic seeds
did u read
newer genes
in bloodless jeans
lolol
Geezer
Mon, 2022-08-01 23:24
Yup...
I did. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Tue, 2022-08-02 12:40
TIRED NOW
RESTING for a while