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My conversation with a famous person.

My conversation with the famous person went something like this! How did you get so famous just by writing and flipping pages? When I become big and Grand my lyricism will be psychedelic, moving within your system like a high repellent!. I told him I'm jealous he said " one day you two will reap great wellness!, be that diamond that you are !as sharp as your poetic lyrics that got you this far"!.

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I see you enjoy writing in prose form. I don’t pretend to understand the form. I’ve only dabbled in it.

Looking forward to reading more from you in future!

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