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My Color Bouquet.Emotion In Colours-March Contest
When you play in the garden of Eden
devour greenery be happy
swimming in the ocean wear a blue bikini
merge with what's next waiting
never ever be angry lovers bring roses
red so many you will cheer up Betty
never feel dull grey is for fools
not you
enjoy orange lovely feeling
when you are pealing
as she comes in a yellow dress
just whistle she'll say woh hoo
you look like Dorris Day only smile
don't say Doris who
as you are invited for a softy
be calm like aqua
cool like silent lake water
a time will now come
when you wanna jump
say Violet where in hell are you
I need you hi sexy are you
when his lips are chilly
say give me rum and lime
in darkness be not scared
go bare cling on to him
here comes an opportunity
as the sky is darkened blue
will it snow or rain ask the met will you
be smart never silly
purple is only for Royalty
you'd wish to be
Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2022-03-15 09:17
hello Lovedly,
I like these lines:
as you are invited for a softy
be calm like aqua
cool like silent lake water
*hugs, Cat
*
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lovedly
Tue, 2022-03-15 11:56
Thanks Cats
only you have read yet Kindness
Candlewitch
Tue, 2022-03-15 12:07
hello
where is everyone???
*hugs, Cat
*
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And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Tue, 2022-03-15 12:57
All are busy
some in greenery
still hoping
many in darkness
also coping
We two are only making merry
reading NEOPOETS lovely poetry
Sunny life we must lead
red blue and green
and as you say
aqua cool
yes I am in these thoughts
with Cats
you
so thank you
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-03-16 06:43
dear lovely lovedly,
I consider myself in with good company >{^*;*^}<
*warm hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-03-16 12:01
Cats
thank you
ur a nice poetess
Geezer
Sat, 2022-03-19 15:14
Hmmmm...
Yes, that would be Violet! She always was "in the mood". and she liked being bare. I said once, how come naked? She said that is such an ugly sounding word; 'bare sounds much nicer and pleases me." Your choice of colors is very well done. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sat, 2022-03-19 16:00
thanks VIOLET MAYBE NAKED OR BARE SHE HAS TO IT SHARE
" Your choice of colors is very well done. ~ Geez.
With you I'm pleased GEE
FRANKLY
you are a beautiful colour what did I think
A ROSE like me
wink wink lol
Lord Barham
Thu, 2022-06-23 00:55
My best subjects were Maths, Art and the Sciences.
A lovedly poem! Thoughtful and sensuous, as per those old Romantics, yet with a playfulness cummings would have envied!
lovedly
Thu, 2022-06-23 12:42
cummings would have envied!
WOW THANKS
Lord Barham
Mon, 2022-07-04 16:25
no one does it like cummings!
Yeah, you have that same sense of playfulness that I get from his stuff. I've tried for it but never quite reached it, so well done!
lovedly
Mon, 2022-07-04 21:36
I am always myself since my birth
if someone is or was like me it's sheer coincidence
Any way rgds and thanks mi LORDS
Lord Barham
Mon, 2022-07-04 22:57
reply to reply
I quite liked his poem, "Anyone Lived In A Pretty How Town". I have read his book about his stay in a French concentration camp during the Great War, "The Enormous Room" twice. I love his description of some of his fellow inhabitants as "delectable mountains".
Lord Barham
Tue, 2022-07-05 00:09
comment = reply
Keep on posting poems! I look forward to seeing more from you.
lovedly
Tue, 2022-07-05 11:37
thanks
do visit my page I have in the past over 19 years posted thousands
DO READ NOW in Q
GIVE PEACE A CHANCE....
U'D LIKE IT
LORDS
Lord Barham
Mon, 2022-07-11 21:51
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Will do! I've been kind of away from the computer for a few days (helping my brother redo his back deck among other things) and also, having the laptop in my lap aggravates my arthritis, tendinitis or bursitis or whatever idiotic itis they haven't found name for yet. Lookin' forward to it.
lovedly
Mon, 2022-07-11 22:01
keep all
ITIS TITIS under folds nail a few here and there tie with threads make no holes
as we age
we need to improve
eppititis loo
so thanks
Mi LORDS
Lord Barham
Mon, 2022-07-11 23:53
reply to reply
Very clever! Tempted to nick it and toss into one or me own poems!
lovedly
Tue, 2022-07-12 00:14
OF COURSE LORD YOU MAY UR LORD NOT I
I have posted a BLOG
tomorrow as a poem I shall post
give you the credit
of INSPIRING ME
Mi Lord
Lord Barham
Sun, 2022-07-24 16:24
reply to reply
It's hard for me to imagine inspiring anyone! (I certainly tried to inspire my students when I was teaching, but how successful I was is anybody's guess. Most of the time, I felt like I was really accomplishing all that much! However, some of my former students would beg to differ.)
lovedly
Sun, 2022-07-24 17:28
You are good
you are selfless
in today's world
one cannot find few
like you
miLORD
lovedly
Tue, 2022-07-26 18:03
mi lordz
have u read my last post for u