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Miraculous Marvels

Miraculous marvels,
A state of mind,
A state of being,
A state of thought.

Miraculous marvel made by one,
Through actions of good conscience,
Meeting up with luck,
Creating a powerful combination.

Fate has also dealt its hand,
As miraculous marvels are only so often,
That they make one appreciate such things,
As they are not ordinary nor commonplace.

Such is that why they mean so much,
In a life where many things mean little,
So in your life be good and true,
And a miraculous marvel may find you.

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Good use of the word miraculous. Pretty satisfying. A wise content too. Wanted to hear some music, so if you maybe added some rhymes here and there, but your poem, your call.... always
thank you for sharing.


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And so very true. Miraculous things happen all around us if we look close enough! Good job.


Thanks Roseblack!

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Simply marvelous! ~ Geezer.

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