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Mine doppelganger complicit as accomplice in pecuniary crime
Disguised as an Apple Computer Technician.
He initially hacked Macbook Pro laptop.
He (alias Harvey Specter)
planted seeds of suspicion
that criminal activity prevailed
within my geographic area in general
or questionable individuals
lurked within or without
Citizens Bank in particular,
and suggested yours truly (me)
to be wary about
over friendly employees
at aforementioned capital one
storied financial institution.
Said gonif (pulled a masterful subterfuge)
inveigling yours truly to carry out heist
of the twenty first century
against his honest good n plenti resources
(subsequently checking and
savings accounts severely depleted).
The invisible webbed wide whirled net
ensnared me lock, stock and barrel.
Little did I know
the spellbinding impact
until the dirty deed done dirt cheap
found writer of these words
figuratively holding the empty bag
where I got forced to trod
analogous highway to hell
courtesy diabolical, inimical, satanical...
devil may care disguised cozener
who wove believable scenario
claiming Citizens Bank employees
involved in suspicious conspiracy
to siphon off hard earned bucks.
I submissively consented
to participate and cavalierly disperse
freshly minted Benjamins
suddenly linkedin
chain of events
rocketing, kickstarting, and experiencing
a worse horror than death
mortified at being bushwhacked.
The feeble explanation, justification,
qua obliteration, ululation
trumped with lame excuse
yours truly not in his right mind.
Mind control, (albeit remotely)
assassinated rationality while hypnotically
feeling commanded, governed,
née kid lee killed
mine esprit de corps
among kith and kin
consigning thrifty troubadour
to the depths of despair
wishing termination of existence
in tandem with damnation, interrogation,
penalization, et cetera of nasty brute.
After series of unfortunate events brought,
where innocence and naïveté caught
teetotaler tempted to drink deadly draught
of top quality hemlock sold
at many bustling entrepôt
cuz now existence fraught
with torturous quaking
nauseating, kickstarting hatred
of self, thus restitution
of funds sought
by folks willing bestow largesse.
If yes check out (fiasco from fraudsters
frazzles father)
legitimate platform
where charitable people swarm.
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Last few words:
Charity Case another pseudonym of mine.
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Mon, 2023-07-03 21:00
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Geezer
Tue, 2023-07-04 07:29
Within the Windows...
of opportunity, you have managed to cultivate
rows of Apples and Mac's cheese for a meal of Cheeze, it's the cops!
DanO and the Hawaiian pineapple are tracking the site-surfers, making the 'cereal killers'
perfect foils, wrapped around the candy brought to our site, the free-lunches, the Lucky Strikes
in contests of skill and maneuvering. Popsicle politics in grape and cherry, make lips of purple obvious and
the Neverland of "That doesn't fly here" works to make pleas of mercy inadequate, unmoved judges and juries
will not rest on Laurel and Hardly brows. Bugging out, the Black Flag of insect repellent, removes the temptation
of dilatation from Profiles in Courage, and chases the tale of the hyena, like something on Wide World of the Wigged Out.
More on the late, late news! ~ Geezer.
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