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MILTON ....BEETHOVEN ..and Lovedly

MILTON
they say
when he became blind
wrote
PARADISE LOST
he lived on for years
added twenty

BEETHOVEN
was deaf he composed
the bestest music
no hearing is needed
it's all writing
thank MUSICAL Lords
he could see

Guess what will happen to
LOVEDLY
half blind
fully deaf
If I lose my mind
Just think poets of NEO

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
On winning my fourth FIRST POEM today plus ...techy errors ...one I thought I have the seeds still
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

no less self-important and certainly all would be amazed at the poet who never quit! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

did you know that Beethoven lay down by the piano, resting his head where he could feel the musical notes and combinations coming from it? there is a movie about Beethoven's life (an Old Movie) the title is: "Immortal Beloved" with Gary Oldman as Beethoven. I think you would love it.

Great poem, by the way!
*hugs, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

I stand educated and as GEE says never QUIT so all will remember LOVEDLY LOL+

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