The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Thank you for sharing your poem "the last laugh". The brevity of the poem is effective in conveying a sense of finality and closure. The use of rhyme and alliteration in the first two lines creates a musicality that contrasts with the dark subject matter. However, the poem's meaning is not entirely clear. It seems to suggest that the woman has somehow gotten revenge on her lover, but the exact nature of this revenge is left open to interpretation. Adding more detail or context to the poem could help clarify its meaning and make it more impactful. Overall, this is a promising start to a poem that could benefit from further development.

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She drove both of them both into a brick wall!!

Great poem - brief and to the point - this is clearly your epitaph - sounds like you ought to write his as well.

I think the first five lines stand on their own, but those two end lines have me confused,

If she got her revenge? wouldn't it be

"He" may still be here if it weren't
for his corvette.

Not

"She" may still be here if it weren't
for his corvette.

I maybe a little too tired its after 1am here but those last two lines threw me. I think this poem has some potential. I look forward to reading the edits.

Kind Regards

Seren