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JUMP WITH JOY

Lovedly returns as before
hope all will be well as afore
Thanks NEOS

Testing my might once again
thanks all

not much of a poem

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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to have lovedly back! ~ Geez.
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Gee
need to get in touch with Paul
thank you pal

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Where Eternity and Infinity Meet

Many serious thoughts …cross one’s mind
when the need draws
some say it's normal,
just wait… others shed tears
what will happen
when I'm no more!
who shall whack my back
as I whine
who will say a bloody good man divine
who will laugh and shout aloud,
gone is the self wallowing clown
then there aren't many dirty fish
In the ocean of life,
many suffer beyond variable strife
yet survive …
some die
ere and ere…
but no one about them does care
ere they die somewhere
out where eternity meets infinity
Loved will be calling out at you
Lovedly
and so be it

a rebirth from toxic times,
when all called to say
the guy doesn't rhyme,
anyway thank goodness, he has merged
but someone will yell,
friend , but not submerged …

till then let the twain be fixed
Eternity with Infinity
between me
as I embark on a voyage beyond Time
where there is no need
to be sad,
if poetry does
or doesn't rhyme

Composing epicurial poetry too
is no crime

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hello there,

THE MARK
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FULL Marks

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what I call FULL poetry! ~ Geez.
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Back as Lovedly

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