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Jeanette You Were My Lil Sis
Jeanette You Were My Lil Sis
Your time on earth expired
Your star up high is rising
We know we know who we are
You were a child of the earth
Jeanette Jeanette
To the earth we came
Your mission here is done
Home to the stars you’re gone
Your planet danced tonight
Jeanette Jeanette.
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raj
Fri, 2020-08-14 02:07
Hi Barbara
sorry to know about the loss of Jeanette which is expressed very aptly in the verses...I join you in your prayers for her soul to rest in eternal peace...
be well..
raj (sublime_ocean)
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2020-08-14 03:12
Thanks
Thanks for stopping by your response is very appreciated
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2020-08-14 15:46
Thanks Teddy
She a shining star now though I can’t see her in the flesh she’s alive to to me.
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Candlewitch
Fri, 2020-08-14 07:26
hello Barbara
I'm so sorry for your loss of your sister. it sounds like you were very close. you've written her a lovely tribute. may you know great joy and comfort in your life.
*hugs, Cat
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2020-08-14 15:48
That’s Cat
Hugs, I am manifesting miracles and life is good though I miss her being here in the flesh with me.
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