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I'll Read Your Smile
I read your smile
there is nothing lovelier
to me than
that gap between
nose and chin
It lights you up
the handsome version
with good teeth
that you've always been
I noticed your smile
before I noticed
your shoulders
head
hair
guile
Other women do too
when you jet off
on corporate jaunts
I fret the smile won't
be for me alone
But you return
all smiles
all manly
all delicious
like crisp apple plump
I read your smile
and I become avaricious
for the sweet juice
kiss
Then I'll read your smile
and I know you're mine
all mine
and all is bliss
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Last few words:
For my husband
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Comments
BettyBuff
Tue, 2013-03-19 17:44
This is for my husband. He
This is for my husband. He makes me happy.
Ian.T
Tue, 2013-03-19 19:34
Betty
A grand smile that holds your heart, a loving write, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Frenchf
Wed, 2013-03-20 19:45
Guile?
Not gile. But nice write
BettyBuff
Thu, 2013-03-21 02:45
Thanks!
Ooops...brain not in gear! Thanks will change. Glad you liked it :))
Ells x