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Hope of Spring

Lovely seasons we all love
and
kids also all above

somehow season can never win
with loveliest kith and kin

dream not of the days gone
cold youth has passed like dawn

hope for a sunnier tomorrow
ere comes autumn again
be in Rome or Spain
but

healthy always one must remain
ever in hopes
alive live till end
again and again

Live in Hope

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Free verse
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Comments

I particularly like.

"dream not of the days gone
cold youth has passed like dawn

hope for a sunnier tomorrow
ere comes autumn again"

Obi.

Obi for liking this
"dream not of the days gone
cold youth has passed like dawn

author comment

There are some very nice lines in your poem. Obi is quite right when he singled out his favorite lines. I concur.
Jerry

It helps me breathe a sigh
I can compose poetry
gem aside

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