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Hope Is All For All

Prayer alone won't help
vaccine only will

Poetry is just a hobby
for all humans
now jobless

let the virus bells chime
then upon it will vaccines climb

till such time
think nought of any one
but yourself
how to save
your own life
live with content the balance
of life's content
at present

only with love
one can with each other cement
all are becoming poorer
me too

economy all over
has also caught flu

what can poor
poets like me do
sympathize with you

pray and ask your own
to come and rescue
what else can
Spiritualists do
except raise faith
just pray also
I will for you

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Free verse
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Dear lovedly, your poem is long and rambling, but I love the content, the title and the spirituality you express. I'm a bit confused about the part saying to just look after oneself, when later you say love can cement relationships.
All in all, I enjoyed it. Will return with more time, we just had a power outage. All the best, Gracy

"My soul is painted like the wings of butterflies; fairy tales of yesterday will grow but never die, I can fly, my friends.” – Freddie Mercury

I just pushed it up
was unread
for quite some time

shall refine
confused mind at times

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