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Hop-toads... [Haiku for Stretching wings workshop]

Hoppy-toads, old frogs
Swim forever in their youth
Ignorance is bliss
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Rhyme for Stretching Wings Workshop.
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Born To Be Wild
I float upon stormy seas
Forever in my youth
Can't bring me to my knees

I'll ride the blustered winds
All my care-free days
Don't think of me a fool
I won't ever change my ways

I'll tame the ways of age
Figure out the road
Keep on jumping all around
Like Spring's hoppy-toad

So don't tell me to go slower
I just can't comply
If I say I will
Just figure it a lie

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

A very good condensation

I tried to do as I thought it should be done, glad I got it right.~ Geez.
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