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Hold me my love
So soothingly
so beautiful
coming from the cream
of modern youth,
my time since then
you make me recall
you wet my lips
and
Whet my appetite...
I love her still
though tis late,
sans we are
sans all
But still we admire the years,
like you we did once kill
but desire lingers still,
let’s be a part of youth again
and
ask time, to for a while stand still....
I and she try still....
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
emogothgirl
Sun, 2015-03-01 20:25
oh my
quite saucy. i like it :)
Mag
lovedly
Sun, 2015-03-01 21:48
glad you do
my friend
creative no?