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Hold me my love

So soothingly
so beautiful
coming from the cream
of modern youth,

my time since then
you make me recall
you wet my lips


Whet my appetite...

I love her still
though tis late,
sans we are
sans all

But still we admire the years,

like you we did once kill
but desire lingers still,
let’s be a part of youth again
ask time, to for a while stand still....

I and she try still....

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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quite saucy. i like it :)


my friend
creative no?

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