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History of Healing
I have to remind myself
that I am like a starfish
not just because
I am sensitive
to touch
but because
I can give a limb
as a defense
if I must
it might not grow back
symmetrically
like the echinoderms
(I might be called
a scar fish
instead of a starfish)
but I will regenerate
and show
that humans
though victims
at times
of tragedy and turmoil
have a history
an ocean-sized history
of healing
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gregwa8
Mon, 2018-08-06 02:04
thanks, Katie!
thanks, Katie!