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Heated Hearts...
I felt a trickle of warmth
as the frozen part of me thawed
One night of heated passion
soothed years of being clawed
When I think of the early days
none too sure of what to do
I smile at the thought of us
so different, me and you
Lust laid down in the backseat
being only second best
Love grew slowly stronger
passing every test
Time has melted our hearts together
welded the parts real strong
Trials buffing out the rough edges
on days that seemed too long
Now I look forward to each day
the sun shines down on my face
The cold, icy lump in my chest
has warm, love of you in it’s place
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Heated Hearts is part of my Valentine's Day present to my wife.
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Comments
Ian.T
Fri, 2013-02-15 09:32
Gee
A lovely tribute to a wonderful Lady,
Nothing else to say as there is no need, only give her our best thoughts..
Yours, Ian.T , Anne & friends
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Geezer
Sun, 2013-02-17 17:42
Thank you all...
she knows how much I love her, but says; It's real nice to know that everyone else knows too! ~ Gee
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
Frenchf
Sat, 2013-02-16 14:53
Beautifully expressed especially the feeling of love
Instead of ice
Geezer
Sun, 2013-02-17 17:46
The warmth...
of my love for her, is what keeps the ice from taking over my life. ~ Gee
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
lonlyhrtsclub13
Sun, 2013-02-24 09:45
love
Can certainly warm the heart...restore faith where it was lost....it can also have the opposite effect...glad u found someone who was able to keep the ice from ur heart
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
Geezer
Mon, 2013-02-25 04:15
There is...
no one more glad than I. After two previous marriages that didn't work out, I didn't know if I would ever love again. She constantly amazes me with the depth of her feelings. ~ Gee
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
lonlyhrtsclub13
Mon, 2013-02-25 10:12
i understand
How tough love can be...amazing when u truly find the one....
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"