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As God Created my Own Desire
" God moves in a way my thoughts couldn't fathom...
just one thing I know is that in every wish my heart desire
in every love my dream have written
in every tear from eyes have crafted
from every joy and love I've experienced
He's the reasons of it....
from all hatred once in my heart stayed
He washed even my guilt
as God created my own desire
He also created the trials I must face"
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Ian.T
Sat, 2012-10-06 04:19
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Firstly welcome to Neopoet and I hope that your time with us will be a great experience for you.
There are many workshops here and never worry about joining late all you need to do on those is read up on what they are doing and have done, then ask to join.
Barbara has an on going one at the moment with a Renga as does Wesley with a storytelling in verse, both are open ended and will add to your learning should you need and I think that goes for us all.
That your God watches over you is good, if you believe in something it is never bad for you if the structure of the belief has a good base.
I await your poetry, there are several poets from your country here at the moment maybe you should all get together using PM's and form a group out there.
Take care, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..