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Favorite Wintry Memory (Dec. Monthly Challenge)

Come see life buds as tucked in bed
as soon as winter showed its head,
but I, with my younger siblings
wake to take up what winter brings.

Generous clouds, those full of rain
soon have washed the seasonal pain,
the snow flakes fall, the snowman sings,
"wake to take up what winter brings."

And when the sky is almost clear,
there shall be more to smell and hear;
the rainbow's hanging with no wings,
wake to take up what winter brings.

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Pls. Find out all about the form here The kyrielle http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/kyrielle.html Kyrielle A Kyrielle is a French form of rhyming poetry written in quatrains (a stanza consisting of 4 lines), and each quatrain contains a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the poem consists of only eight syllables. There is no limit to the amount of stanzas a Kyrielle may have, but three is considered the accepted minimum. Some popular rhyming schemes for a Kyrielle are: aabB, ccbB, ddbB, with B being the repeated line, or abaB, cbcB, dbdB. Mixing up the rhyme scheme is possible for an unusual pattern of: axaZ, bxbZ, cxcZ, dxdZ, etc. with Z being the repeated line. The rhyme pattern is completely up to the poet.
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Hello, Rula,
Another well-written structured poem. Wonderful energy - I can feel the excitement from you and your younger siblings, and can appreciate the beauty that waits for all of you outdoors. Great job with meter and rhyme. Well done!
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S2,L2 - use "have" in place of "has" when referring to clouds, plural. Correct?

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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