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Eye Contact

She looked into
my eye

held it longer
for a while
more than three seconds
not done
unless for nightly fun
but none was done

so keep away from strangers' eye
many em vie
why feel shy

hold on for a while
in lovedly's style

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
they say eye contact is dangerous some may give inappropriate messages some invites how would one know
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Comments

looked into just one of your eyes eh? Yeah those lying eyes. Nice fun poem

enjoyed reading this fun poem that seems to be Lovedly's style, lol. Jerry

scribbler
and
Jerry
fun is life's
pun
we all still do
and
have since eons done
b merry have
++++++++++fun

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