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DREAM WIFE

She is a dream wife
Her who is instinctive
Whose life is progressive

She is a dream wife
Her who is proactive
Whose senses are positive

She is a dream wife
Her who is persuasive
Whose care is attentive

She is a dream wife
Her who is generative
Whose present is curative

She is a dream wife
Her who is motivative
Whose words are motive

She is a dream wife
Her who is intuitive
Whose feelings are impressive

She is a dream wife
Her who is educative
Whose thoughts are sensitive

©NYOK MAKER MARENG

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Nice piece of writing!
You have appreciated your dream wife with the choice of word. I believe she will smile when she read it. I like the whole stanza.

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