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DREAM WIFE
She is a dream wife
Her who is instinctive
Whose life is progressive
She is a dream wife
Her who is proactive
Whose senses are positive
She is a dream wife
Her who is persuasive
Whose care is attentive
She is a dream wife
Her who is generative
Whose present is curative
She is a dream wife
Her who is motivative
Whose words are motive
She is a dream wife
Her who is intuitive
Whose feelings are impressive
She is a dream wife
Her who is educative
Whose thoughts are sensitive
©NYOK MAKER MARENG
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Mr joghe
Fri, 2022-06-24 17:19
Nice piece of writing!
Nice piece of writing!
You have appreciated your dream wife with the choice of word. I believe she will smile when she read it. I like the whole stanza.
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