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Dream Girl She

A lovely dream came
to you
to me dreams
come to teach
most of my poems
are dreamy
they come to me
now to you I reach
read 'em please

you yourself are
a lover's dream
shhhhh, don't scream
love is like ice cream
enjoy let it not melt
wish later you will be
lovely girl you must be
keep dreaming of me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

lol , love is like ice-cream don't let it melt. Oh you are adorable. I think if you tried to write a fab free verse it would be so wonderful. This is another fun write my friend

Thank you...Teddy

write a fab free* verse it would be so wonderful. * MEANING????

This is another fun write my friend

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