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Distant Planes Of Dreams(co-write w/Cat in chat)

On many a cold night
My mind will remember
Your soft,smiling eyes
And I cry
To the shadows
For release
From the sadness of
Emotions gone wild
But not forgotten

Your deep, smokey voice
Calls to me
From across the sea

When will we meet
On distant planes
Of joyous expectation
Fulfilling a dream
Of getting lost
Within your sighs

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
This was written by Candlewitch and China Blue during Friday nights chat session
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i will read this again at leisure to absorb its essence...

raj (sublime_ocean)

Ladies

Somehow this poem seems to be written about one I am praying for at this time. I will revisit ladies and great duet by you both.

Love and Hugs
Mona
xox

well done i think this a beautiful, emotional expression of how it feels to long for the one you love.

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

It was fun, we should have another ladies night sans men LOL!!!

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

Chrys is equally easy to write with. I had a great time, but next chat I think we should leave the raspberry sauce off the pizza!

Love, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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The sausage didn't help

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

We are just brilliant together! LOL! It is so good to see you!!!

Love, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

We are, aren't we
thanks
Chrys

Chrys
Let your mercy spill on all these burning hearts in hell(Leonard Cohen)

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