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Demons in the Rough-(Shark Pool submission).final edit.

Should life send you wandering
out, and about at twilighttime,

your world could change immediatly
or stop cold, on a dime.

that pathway, that one chooses
will be a lesson learned,

one road will be less travelled
the other, you'll get burned.

Should this twilight force hit you
I can't emphasise, enough;

you're going to pay profusely
for your demons in the rough.

What you have to offer
gets split into two ways,

you are asked to posess the shadows
or, adhere to the light of your days.

Listen t your inner heart
and, I say this..."off the cuff";

for everything you choose in life
you'll create your demons in the rough!

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
To the sharkpool, I p[ologse fo no availability. doc.
Editing stage: 

Comments

...I kind of know whatyou mean. but, I can't edit ANYTHING It really IS, quite unsetling, what withthis roken keboard!
Nice to hear from you,
sincerely,
docmaverick.

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...from the heart, or a reasonable faxcimile;
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