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crave

Too tired to care,
too aware not too,
I cannot pull the wisdom craved,
talking down to anything lower,
hate to be a burden, teach me something I don’t
know or they’re cutting your throat.
Pressed out during this season,
unlike last time, when we experienced in fragments,
submit to oneself & no other deity.

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the first two lines are the heart of the poem. I can really relate to this!

*hugs, Cat

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I liked the feeling of your poem. It has soul. Thanks for sharing. Love and light. Namaste

Love and light. Namaste.

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