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crave
Too tired to care,
too aware not too,
I cannot pull the wisdom craved,
talking down to anything lower,
hate to be a burden, teach me something I don’t
know or they’re cutting your throat.
Pressed out during this season,
unlike last time, when we experienced in fragments,
submit to oneself & no other deity.
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2022-03-01 11:00
hello,
the first two lines are the heart of the poem. I can really relate to this!
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Tracey Underwood
Wed, 2022-03-02 17:15
Great!
I liked the feeling of your poem. It has soul. Thanks for sharing. Love and light. Namaste
Love and light. Namaste.