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Be No Disbeliever-- Disbeliever

be no disbeliever
disbeliever

I never ever want to believe
disbelievers
what
I had died for 10 minutes
then survived my heart beat revived
of its own

Believe me
you all must apply your mind
A foolish guy told my mom
at 13 I would or should die

a few years on
he passed away
now till 80
I still have my way

Nothing Beyond Beyond
I still say
you all did not read
at least now you may
Corona passes our way
every day

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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a second opinion is always helpful,

goodness me there is a lot to digest in this poem,
well done for staying alive and steer clear of covid, its a nasty bug.

Thank you...Teddy

your good wishes are always solicited
thanks
yes I will live
till my body can fight
the virus etc
and
my IMMUNE system
as it is so far
remains safe
then heart fail
my mind is as strong as the
ROCK OF GIBRALTAR

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your views pl
any other may also

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No disrespect to ian, but i think in a poem this verse is truly redundent

Nothing Beyond Beyond
I still say
you did not read
Ian----------------------------------- try reading it without

Thank you...Teddy

is nowhere near long enough to get to the other side. You are right, no one has ever come back to say, yea or nay. Because when they get there, they don't ever want to come back. Ghosts, spirits, whatever you want to call them, haven't crossed. It is written, that "No man shall pierce the veil and know the other side before his time." That means that no one is coming back to
say what it is like or confirm or deny it. ~ Geez.
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The whole factual truth
a known reality
which has been given
authencity

The body simply smoulders
Gee
There is nothing
BEYOND BEYOND
All is s man made up theory
my belief
retain yours
kindly

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Good edit, I've heard these type stories before, it's quite worrying to think of these doctors who don't really practice with their minds nor with passion. Some just go mad I'm afraid. Having been saved after 10 minutes yourself gives me chills, I like what Geezer has said. Who ever really knows?

Thank you...Teddy

I was under a BIG truck
accident
what god
no doctor

My wife pulled me out after 10 minutes
once she had recovered our two very small kids

TRUE
MAY BELIEVE you
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