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Autumn Fun......CONTEST NOV 2018 AUTUMN

Ha autumn is again here
getting stripped and enjoying nudity
all gals dance about a pole
shred their clothes like dying leaves
who now show what lay beneath
stark bark
no fruits like dangling food
apples and bananas
no breast
nor busts
all taken away
before autumn arrived this day

Ah all oldies too enjoy autumn
as any one like you
dance about in the park
Semi nude

if trees can show why can't they
all ask Lovedly
and the answer is get bare
autumn is here
do be aware
no shyness is needed

many autumns we all have seen
abs naked but very exotic
like multi coloured autumn leaves

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NOV CONTEST AUTUMN FUN
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You is trying to freeze me it is no fun to be bare in winters air.
I sometimes chill in autumn's grip and like a leaf sometimes fall down.
If only we could fall ups, it would save some bills as going down just brings ills.
Have a great day young Bard of mine, keep warm and make sure your danglers are fine lol
Yours Ian

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

the whole house is fully warm ---air conditioned
one can wear no clothes
on that's the charm
outtta my window every leaf i see
saying good bye like human we
the only difference is they don't cry
but just fly high up in to the sky
as winds and cyclones and storms come by

thanks Ian for seeing me
now I shall wear clothes not tight but free
as night falls and most oldies are half past
you can also at your crumbling age here last
Come Ian it's midnight past

autumn is fun
see from my window

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best wishes Lovedly...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

thanks

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I don't see your contribution
why?

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