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apples lof love

Sitting under an apple tree,
she and me
which apple to taste first

one up on the tree
or the one,
one yet can't see
hidden in the bushes
of my friend ye...

Then she smiled
how’s apple feeling?
under her blushes
my mouth started watering
what an appeal
she did my heart steal
under the bushes
we did play
let tree apples
where they were stay

what delicious apple said she
Adam and Eve

all my friends ye
they ate the apples off that tree???

Don't pull me!!!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 


i am now going to do some pull ups
staring from me
so many poets in pages
4 to 12
have only one comment
including yours truly
so now eat apples
with me
will ye

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have a bite Adam and Eve r again here

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