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And As Of Now

Headlong toward the final analysis,
where life is in summary.
A series of snapshots,
moments, stacked up against us.
But when the light goes
what will have been the point?
Where will we find an ending?
where will we lay our casket?

And as of now?

There is surely a place test bedded for each,
and that place is here,
and the time is now.
Be certain to own this instant,
this moment which had no price.
There is gratification
and there is life,
life is where you find where love lives.

And love is truly our richest gift,
Love is also in your gift to give.

Pryderi Duntz

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words: 
Lived? Not quite complete. Life? Oh a Work In Progress. Purpose? You tell me!
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

Love the q’s raised…

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Thank you for reading this piece. I am happy you found something here. Pryderi.

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strong statements stated here. I like what you have done with this piece. just one suggestion: remove all of the "ands" it doesn't need them. read it out loud and you will se the difference. otherwise it is very good work... quite stimulating!

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