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Within the Shepherd’s Heart

 You have surrounded me with this plague
Oh Lord my God, you are poetic
With in you every thing is copacetic
we humans are so pathetic


Goodness and humor your favorite vices
Like the ventriloquists’ dummies; the things they say
They  are your words; unknowingly
Master puppeteers' are blissfully ignorant of their silence
 You are our Shepherd with indifference
Ironically; your humor is bittersweet
It makes the marionette laugh and
The puppeteer becomes aware of its Master’s hands
 The bleating sheep are yet to be sheared
With honesty and laughter you tear and tare
These earthen dummies with strings attached
Heartlessly; hands shoved into their backs The heard needs one good whack across its back
To break all their strings, to replace halos and wings
To hear the Cherubim’s sing
Oh to hear those angels sing To lead and guide
To carry and hide
To be gathered beneath their enormous wings
Attached but yet, without strings Staffs in hand
Awaiting the golden bands
Announcements made
Time not delayed The curtain it rolls away
The heathen is swayed
Lives reborn homage paid
Truth is now displayed Clay pots broken; their silver cords part
One makes for a brand new start
They become real Sons'
Within the Shepherd’s heart


A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Apr 12, 2010

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Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 1 month ago

I got Hacked and lost control of My box

I am back today for how long I don't know I'll reformatt later and clean it up some latter tonight if I still have control of my computer Got hit by a Utube Virus claiming to be a video of me found by a friend who was hacked also It stole all my freinds links on face book and tried to get them also, it is a nasty little bugger which I have isolated, but can't delete yet so have no clue what might reactivate it. Caught it on my facebook site so don't open any e-mail or links or pictures from Me I didn't send them to you unless we speak about them first be back tonight Have got one of the kids today for four Hours Yeah !!! about @#$#% Time But it seems I am needed and on my terms and not the courts or hers! Donnie/Sinbad
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Damn, how’d I miss this?

Damn, how'd I miss this? Not much to do, but this, Kal: You have surrounded me with the plague Oh Lord, my God, you are poetic; goodness and humor your favorite vices; like the ventriloquists’ dummies, the things they say are your words; unknowingly the master’s puppeteer is blissfully ignorant of his helplessness You are our Shepherd with indifference ironically, your humor is bittersweet; it makes the marionette laugh and the puppets aware of its Master’s hands The bleating sheep are yet to be sheared with honesty and laughter you tear and tare these earthen dummies with strings attached The herd needs one good whack across its back to break all their strings, to replace halos and wings to hear the Cherubim’s sing, oh, to hear those angels sing! To lead and guide to carry and hide gathered beneath their enormous wings, staffs in hand awaiting the golden bands announcements made! The curtain rolls away the heathen swayed lives reborn homage paid truth is now displayed Clay pots broken silver cords part One makes for a brand new start within the Shepherd’s heart. Brilliant poem! Thank you. ~Anna "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you for some know it takes me some time and time

Is not all ways mine to control, this virus I caught, Caught me off guard and I need to valudate my Microsoft Liscens they say I have a fake one and I say I don't but either way they want money so it will take me some time to raise for I think they are the cause of some of this computers failings too!! But Thanks for the read and the formatting corrections which I 'll get to later tonight, I hope Donnie/Sinbad Kal I don't know how into your religion you are some of stuff here is going to be obscured from some of the readers of this poem. but Yes I know i am late in getting to work on this but it is a glitch I hope to radicate soon Donnie/Sinbad
weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 10 months ago

Wow Donnie! this is strong stuff!

Your choice, our choices, no strings. I admire this more than every poem you have ever written copacetic great word! The heard [herd?] needs one good whack across its back You know I don't like religious poetry but you have written it with passion and grace. Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique.