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How dare he?!?!?!

Well, the day after Thanksgiving, my boyfriend dumped me, over text, for one of my super hot, skanky friends. He had spent the previous day at her house, and, as it turns out, had been cheating on me with her for several week. Thanksgiving night, I had a feeling that he had lost interest in me, and was more interested in my friend. I told him my feelings and he assured me that they where unfounded. At 11:30 am the next morning he dumped me! WTF!?!

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is that a 'AND' before 'as it turns out,'
'for several weekS'?

feels kinda like a facebook update, not much of a piece.
interesting, but not poetic to me.
but who am i?

This is a blog, not a poem. There doesn't have to be anything poetic about it. Blogs are for posting purposes, according to the AEC. http://new.neopoet.com/hooded-stranger/blog/thu-2011-08-25-1949

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Sounds as if it is better you found out now than later. Plenty more fish in the pond

and the director made unreasonable, egotistical or plain stupid demands or decisions
"tell him fuck him, no, fuck him, tell him nothing"

You are well out of it and he will get AIDS from the skank and you will become a fully realised independent strong female poet (or whatever you want)

cheers,
Jess
Neopoet Directors

I was feeling so awkward
that the Wizard of poetry
should lower down
to add himself , as a
fan of a non -poet me....

Thanks you erase me from the surface...
But I love your comment above
about fucking ....

With your permission ,
may i use it as a Quote'''''
Thanks..ex fan...
My maker .
I know you must have abandoned reading my poetry ----slang as it may appear to thee

loved

I plan to either become a micro biologist or a french teacher, though I certainly intend to continue to write poetry, no matter what!

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He is an immature dirt bag who has no taste or class... you are better off without him.

always, Cat

When you fling poo, some of the stink sticks to you!

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There is nothing more hurtful than betrayal from t he ones we love, Life finds a way, and your wounds will heal .Many times, I think it is our Ego that suffers most., However, whatever the cause, t he pain is the same. Go on with your studies, This was meant to be.

Respectfully,

LONGO

///FUCK HIM .... THE DIRECTOR COULD BE A LADY OR MANLY
THEN... OH FUCK HIM /HER ..
JUST FORGET IT..

HOW R U FRIEND.
HOPE AS USUAL
STANDING UP TO THE MEASUREMENTS OF SOCIETY AND LORD'S norms

loved

but i still feel slightly sick when i see him in the halls. i think i suffered from frusteration attraction. lookit up, tee hee! :)

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Well, I've dumped and been dumped many, many, many, many, many times. If you ever need a gypsy curse, let me know. Problem is they don't work. :)

LONGO

you have quite a sence of humor, but thanks for the offer! ;)

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:) Read THE ROSE, and you think you had probems. Women in the early 20th century==especially Italian women--had little choices. At any rate, keep well and kick ass!

LONGO

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