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How dare he?!?!?!
Well, the day after Thanksgiving, my boyfriend dumped me, over text, for one of my super hot, skanky friends. He had spent the previous day at her house, and, as it turns out, had been cheating on me with her for several week. Thanksgiving night, I had a feeling that he had lost interest in me, and was more interested in my friend. I told him my feelings and he assured me that they where unfounded. At 11:30 am the next morning he dumped me! WTF!?!
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Comments
the_fool
Sun, 2011-11-27 21:24
ummm...
is that a 'AND' before 'as it turns out,'
'for several weekS'?
feels kinda like a facebook update, not much of a piece.
interesting, but not poetic to me.
but who am i?
Rhiannon1010
Mon, 2011-11-28 13:29
yes, it is an AND.
This is a blog, not a poem. There doesn't have to be anything poetic about it. Blogs are for posting purposes, according to the AEC. http://new.neopoet.com/hooded-stranger/blog/thu-2011-08-25-1949
scribbler
Sun, 2011-11-27 22:37
Hmm....
Sounds as if it is better you found out now than later. Plenty more fish in the pond
weirdelf
Tue, 2011-11-29 08:28
We had an old saying when I worked in the film industry
and the director made unreasonable, egotistical or plain stupid demands or decisions
"tell him fuck him, no, fuck him, tell him nothing"
You are well out of it and he will get AIDS from the skank and you will become a fully realised independent strong female poet (or whatever you want)
cheers,
Jess
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loved
Sat, 2012-01-14 06:05
You R Simply Excellent... my Ex Fan
I was feeling so awkward
that the Wizard of poetry
should lower down
to add himself , as a
fan of a non -poet me....
Thanks you erase me from the surface...
But I love your comment above
about fucking ....
With your permission ,
may i use it as a Quote'''''
Thanks..ex fan...
My maker .
I know you must have abandoned reading my poetry ----slang as it may appear to thee
loved
Rhiannon1010
Tue, 2011-11-29 13:29
My current thoughts exactly.
I plan to either become a micro biologist or a french teacher, though I certainly intend to continue to write poetry, no matter what!
Candlewitch
Wed, 2012-01-11 12:36
Hello,
He is an immature dirt bag who has no taste or class... you are better off without him.
always, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Geremia
Wed, 2012-01-11 14:13
There is nothing more hurtful
There is nothing more hurtful than betrayal from t he ones we love, Life finds a way, and your wounds will heal .Many times, I think it is our Ego that suffers most., However, whatever the cause, t he pain is the same. Go on with your studies, This was meant to be.
Respectfully,
LONGO
loved
Sat, 2012-01-14 05:56
I FOR ONCE LOVED MY EX FAN ...WEIRD IF 'S COMMENT ABOVE
///FUCK HIM .... THE DIRECTOR COULD BE A LADY OR MANLY
THEN... OH FUCK HIM /HER ..
JUST FORGET IT..
HOW R U FRIEND.
HOPE AS USUAL
STANDING UP TO THE MEASUREMENTS OF SOCIETY AND LORD'S norms
loved
Rhiannon1010
Wed, 2012-01-11 14:18
he no longer causes me pain
but i still feel slightly sick when i see him in the halls. i think i suffered from frusteration attraction. lookit up, tee hee! :)
Geremia
Wed, 2012-01-11 14:34
Well, I've dumped and been
Well, I've dumped and been dumped many, many, many, many, many times. If you ever need a gypsy curse, let me know. Problem is they don't work. :)
LONGO
Rhiannon1010
Wed, 2012-01-11 14:41
lol.
you have quite a sence of humor, but thanks for the offer! ;)
Geremia
Wed, 2012-01-11 15:33
:) Read THE ROSE, and you
:) Read THE ROSE, and you think you had probems. Women in the early 20th century==especially Italian women--had little choices. At any rate, keep well and kick ass!
LONGO