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purplekay
Member since September 24, 2017
Member for 8 years, 8 months
SINCERE DECEPTION
Living in my own world
Alone and safe in this tranquility
Forced to come out of my shell
Scared to take a leap of faith
Competing with the best
Knowing i would be beaten at the test
A competition meant to be fair
Hoping to emerge the best pair
Exercising the spirit of sportmanship
Hoping not to ruin a valuable friendship
Fighting to lead an impossible group
Hope i wouldn't be thrown out by a coup
Though they do not believe in me
Atleast now i know the true ones indeed
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I may not be the winner
But i still got the potentials to be a leader
Praying to emerge the head
Knowing deep down i won't be misled
Faced with a lot of responsibility
With God, i have a good chance of possibility
purplekay’s timeline
- September 2022
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24 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2018
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24 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2017
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29 FriReceived a critique
on SINCERE DECEPTION from @chevyvent
""Living in my own world Alone and safe in this tranquility", this really hits home to me in so many ways., I love your quality work it hits head on you have been given a gift a complete style you know. Freedom comes at…" -
28 ThuReceived a critique
on SINCERE DECEPTION from @lovedly
"I know since ages he promotes all sincerely U r in good hands really just believe me" -
27 WedReceived a critique
on THE FAULT IN OUR STARS from @lovedly
"have burned the midnight's oil through ages Poetry is just an inner emotion many don't know why the poet is saying so but give a hint here and there so that all poets and readers come to know the cause of your isolated…" -
27 Wed
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27 WedReceived a critique
on SINCERE DECEPTION from @Simon
"it give me an inspirations and a lot of things to of." -
27 WedReceived a critique
on SINCERE DECEPTION from @Sparrow
"I have sent you a Private Message you should be able to find it. To show where you can get help and a bit more about Neopoet. I will look at this piece and divide it up a little as a starter, but just ask. Yours, Sparro…" -
26 TueReceived a critique
on SINCERE DECEPTION from @chevyvent
"Made me think of my own work in your piece. Really reflective on all key points. A sorted reason for being locked in your own shell. Look each of us go through phases in life its not a perfect road or world. We make man…" -
26 TueReceived a critique
on SINCERE DECEPTION from @Sparrow
"Great to read some of your words, just read some of the others pieces and check the layouts. There are a few workshops that you can join if you can't find what you need just ask any of the poets that stream. Take care…" -
26 Tue
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26 TueCritiqued
"SIMPLE LOGIC" by @Ja Ja
"i really love the message passed across. it really helps people to think more about life. welldone" -
26 TueCritiqued
"SIMPLE LOGIC" by @Ja Ja
"i really love the message passed across. it really helps people to think more about life. welldone" -
24 Sun
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24 SunFirst critique offered
on "Rest in peace father " by @Marvel Godwyn
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24 SunFirst publication
THE FAULT IN OUR STARS
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24 Sun
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24 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
i am a teenager and a young poet of 15 years old. i love writing poems and it has become my greatest passion.
Location: Nigeria, Lagos
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