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Pop GoddessG666
Member since August 31, 2022
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EVERYNIGHT
Every night I look up at the moon, wondering if I'm doomed! they always say your a flower;bloom! all these trials and tribulations make me feel like I'm never gunna make it too that room. I always knew I was entergalatic since the day I came outta da womb .one day folks gon read Rip KRW on a tomb. so I tell em yooo while I'm standin make room; I'm coming through jumping over brooms. get it? when I'm on scene I light up the room, I'm not a diamond in da rough I'ma rough diamond just like the moon even at night I'm shinin I know you feel my rhymin! progression ,obsession, hear my possession, harmony is a big reflection but guess what I was a selection check my projection.
WRITTEN BY: KEANNA .W. #AKA GODDESSG
Pop GoddessG666’s timeline
- August 2023
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31 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2023
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19 WedReceived a critique
on EVERYNIGHT from @Lavender
"Hello, Keanna, Your writing is poetry rap. Very nice rhythm. Perfect for live performance and spoken poetry. Hope you have an open mic venue to showcase your talent! Best, Lavender" -
19 WedPosted a poem
EVERYNIGHT
"Every night I look up at the moon, wondering if I'm doomed! they always say your a flower;bloom! all these trials and tribulations make me feel like I'm never gunna make it too that room. I always knew I was entergalatic since the day I came outta da womb .one day folks gon read Rip KRW on a tomb. so I tell em yooo while I'm standin make room; I'm coming through jumping over brooms. get it? when I'm on scene I light up the room, I'm not a diamond in da rough I'ma rough diamond just like the moon even at night I'm shinin I know you feel my rhymin! progression ,obsession, hear my possession, harmony is a big reflection but guess what I was a selection check my projection." - September 2022
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22 ThuReceived a critique
on My conversation with a famous person. from @Ray Whitaker
"I see you enjoy writing in prose form. I don’t pretend to understand the form. I’ve only dabbled in it. Looking forward to reading more from you in future!" -
21 WedPosted a poem
My conversation with a famous person.
"My conversation with the famous person went something like this! How did you get so famous just by writing and flipping pages? When I become big and Grand my lyricism will be psychedelic, moving within your system like a high repellent!. I told him I'm jealous he said " one day you two will reap great wellness!, be that diamond that you are !as sharp as your poetic lyrics that got you this far"!." -
09 FriReceived a critique
on A Trip Down Memory Lane. from @Jackweb
"is through, Geezer and Lavender had earlier pointed out about the structure. That would have make it more easier to be interpreted. Point of correction: No word for (Unblindly) Should be: (Unblinded or Blindly). Your fo…" -
09 FriReceived a critique
on A Trip Down Memory Lane. from @Lavender
"Greetings, Pop Goddess! My interpretation of this feels like rap. If not, so sorry and I agree it should have more structured form to be easier to read and interpret. But if it is rap, there is something about it that i…" -
09 FriReceived a critique
on A Trip Down Memory Lane. from @Geezer
"what you have here. I do wish that you would make it easier to read by putting it in verses or stanzas. [three or four lines]. ~ Geezer. ." -
09 FriFirst publication
A Trip Down Memory Lane.
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09 FriPosted a poem
A Trip Down Memory Lane.
"A trip down memory lane, okay don't expect this to be sane! I remember alot till this age. Unblindly I was always in a rage, mama wasn't there too page standing there waiting, mannequin mode steadily anticipating! In the beginning always crying mama always lying,. My tears started too feel like grime, they had no more time! Granny let me see the light I'ma lime!!. Both sour and bright, I'll put up a fight my memories are a lane that's only one way, so. Don't merge into something with a chaotic space.!" - August 2022
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31 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 9 days later.
About Me
About me
I love too write, draw, read, etc!! I've always had a great way with words!.
Location: United States of America
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