BETWEEN NEED AND DESIRE

Need and desire, very well portrayed Ziggy. Great write. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

its very late here at the moment or early depends which way you look at it lol I will come back and reread but this is really great ... loved it Zig's love and hugs JayCee x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

Another one of your finest works. Good imagery and flow. I love the theme. My favorite lines: Who amongst you holds the truth of the revolt the unknown destitute the lies that`s nourished between the tales the passing consequence that fails. Impaled here on your envy the preconceived lies that empty the needy from their lot born of status a titled name or not. Do you grit your teeth through want and hunger has all around you fell asunder born to blunder hopeless wonder. The mighty thankless rich unregarding dissident hiss, born to plenty little amiss contrived as the passing hour with a lasting taste that`s sour. ;) Always, Cat

Zigs, from what I can see, you didn't change anything from the original write, I am pleased, as it really needed nothing more done to it, in my humble opinion! I really liked the image this one casts and again you've added your unique rhyming style to it. The rhyming is subtle and doesn't jump out as being a rhyming poem, but it is there. Obviously this piece is incomplete! It has no intro, chorus or bridge!! Lol! Seriously, leave it exactly as it is. You are always a good read my friend. You shouting for Holland or Spain...if you're not sure go with Holland as my music partner is Dutch...and he hates football and will get no sleep for a week if they win!! Lol! he is sick to death of people, houses, cars and everything being daubed in orange! Lol! I digress, great visual poem. I think when we have that JD I'll bring my laptop and microphone, it would be good to hear your voice to some of these. regards, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

SPOT ON WITH THIS ONE!!! This is a fine piece my friend and I shall come back and offer up a word or two. Keep up the good work Love Mona worthy of a Nom and brightened stars :)

Can't see anything I would change. Great imagery , great write . love lou xx