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" L E T T E R " by: itzhak bareket.


   ...i know,believe me,i know,
      sorry to bother you,'xcuse me
                but what can i do...?
    i have had always a lot of  questions
  problems...this one is really essential
                     existential:

      WHO AND WHERE IS THE CHIEF ?

         whom shall we follow ?
           FLESH BODY'S DESIRES ?
       INTELECT'S JUDGEMENT'S ?
    who is giving the executiv orders ?

     it seems that we know something
   but i know that i don't know.......nothing.!

 how come that brain,is producing thoughts
     and they are able to organise
  our ordinary and extraordinary functions,deeds ?

                  OH  MY  G O D
    help me to find the adequate answers,
               the wright way...

 
— itzhak bareket, Jul 06, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

hello again

I like the title, pacing and theme. Language usage is good and it all comes together nicely at the end. My favorite lines: OH MY G O D help me to find the adequate answers, the wright way… Always, Cat