Stolen Time Displaced has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

Stolen Time Displaced
Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/stolen-time-displaced/

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Jun 28, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

yenti

16 years ago

Sinbad

A great write and the flow was very good, loved the theme so it was great all round, look forward to the next, Yours Ian.T

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years ago

Thank you, Ian I've been playing with it some

Glad you liked it I can't wait to see what comes next myself. Even if I don't get some of them my self, but it's not my job to understand is it? *L* Well you couldn't prove to me that it was any way. Thanks for the read and comments. Donnie/Sinbad

loved

16 years ago

very nice

.this is the first one of urs i've read liked it

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years ago

Thank You Much I have many, Please continue to read!

I am so disjointed both in mind in body I think my spirit though broken is sturdy I am On line again and though I think I may never win I will keep a trying Thanks for your Time and commits here at Neo I will seek your works out eventually and I will read, but I may or may not comment on them too quickly Donnie/SinbadBut the site is call Gradesaver.com

xena465

16 years ago

Beautiful Donnie

Stolen time can never be replaced, but memories are forever. No one can steal them. "Nothing is new under our sun Not since this old life of ours begun". I love these lines best, and all the rest of course. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years ago

Moving too Fast or too slow, minding how far one should go

An old Gambling verse I have heard I think. Thats the way it goes, first your money and then your clothes, I forget the rest. Stolen time can't be replaced. But there is always time to sow and what we sow we shall reap and memories a far greater then gold, to behold ah yes. I like em too those lines aren't mine altogether just words rearranged from the Good Book's verses, but the Author is not worried about plagiarism in fact, He enjoys it I believe. Donnie/Sinbad

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