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Jun 21, 2010
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Evil Emancipation
Evil Emancipation
Flesh that is oozing corruption
melts from the sin of my bones
flowing without interruption
into a darkness unkown
Nightmares are dreams of the living
seen through the eyes of the dead
fantasies quite unforgiving
that crawl through the cave of my head
Screams that erupted from laughter
echo forever in time
odes to despair and disaster
chanted in meter and rhyme
Here, on the threshold of madness,
I sink into pits of despair
driven by torment and sadness
no prayers can dispel or repair
Unleashing the demon within me,
I drink from the blood of it's hate
seeing my soul resolutely
arise to embrace it's true fate
C. Lon R. Bruso
Flesh that is oozing corruption
melts from the sin of my bones
flowing without interruption
into a darkness unkown
Nightmares are dreams of the living
seen through the eyes of the dead
fantasies quite unforgiving
that crawl through the cave of my head
Screams that erupted from laughter
echo forever in time
odes to despair and disaster
chanted in meter and rhyme
Here, on the threshold of madness,
I sink into pits of despair
driven by torment and sadness
no prayers can dispel or repair
Unleashing the demon within me,
I drink from the blood of it's hate
seeing my soul resolutely
arise to embrace it's true fate
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jun 21, 2010
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Critiques
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
This is awesome. Your rhythm
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Many thanks, Sue!
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
This is amazing
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Lil Z!
Roscoe Lane
15 years 11 months ago
Lonnie,
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you Roscoe!
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Fab Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Xena!
poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Lon
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, M'Dear!
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
Now Lonnie,
Tonya
15 years 11 months ago
p.s.
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Tonya!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
evil
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Scribbler!
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
The flow in this ones superb
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Jaycee!
mand
15 years 11 months ago
What can I say, I agree with
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Mand!
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Judy!
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
he was a world war 11 poet lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Wow!!!
diana duncan
15 years 11 months ago
Good came out of Evil
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Diana!
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
The brilliance of you!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Shirley!
Sinbadthesailorman
15 years 11 months ago
Made me pause only once was this your intent?
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Hmmm! Not sure, Sinbad!
Sinbadthesailorman
15 years 11 months ago
I enjoyed the whole Poem Lonnie and I push the (+) button also
Shayla rae
15 years 11 months ago
wow, great poem. the rythm
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Shayla Rae!
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
my suggestions on a usually
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Anna!
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
Lonnie, what can I say?
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Rett!
Geezer
15 years 11 months ago
Glad to see ya ...
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Geezer!
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
wow
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Green Eyes!
Breakinglogic
15 years 11 months ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, logic!
Noirjente
15 years 11 months ago
!!!!!