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Mowing

       Mowing


A trickle of sweat slowly runs down between my breasts
My imagination dreams your face before me
Your tongue all eager to follow that same path
Somehow, I can even feel that magical tongue

    As the mower does its thing, me, simply the guide

The scent of the fresh cut lawn takes me back to another time
You, me, no blanket, under the star filled sky
Those cut offs you wore revealing just how happy you were to see me
Oh what a night that was
Do you remember it as vividly as I do ?

    As the mower does its thing, me, simply the guide

Others are hearing a lawn mower
In my mind, your Harley is pulling up the driveway
There you are, hair blowing in the breeze
Smiling that sexy smile and flashing those brilliantly white teeth
Those "stop me in my tracks" green eyes hidden behind your shades
Holy shit. Even in my day dreams, you make me wet

    As the mower does its thing, me, simply the guide

THUD!! Uh oh....hit a rock.
Yes, I also recall that.
That rock pile we lived on, however briefly
Someone was always getting hurt.
Casting of stones became habit much too easily
I don't miss the pain.
I doubt you do either.
But my heart misses that love we once shared
and....................the sex.

    Oh hell, I hate weed whacking!

— jetz, Mar 01, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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jetz

jetz

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Rosina, LOL…..Sorry I

Hi Rosina, LOL.....Sorry I made you blush.You'll be happy to know I don't often write poems like this. Thanks for the read. Sue
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

It did seem an unlikely poem

It did seem an unlikely poem from you...Your new picture suits the mood of the poem...very sexy. It's good to write about different things...even naughty poems, but it's classy too. Rosina xena465
jetz

jetz

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Judy, You should see my

Hi Judy, You should see my thoughts when I'm in the garden !!!!! Thanks for reading and responding. Sue
jetz

jetz

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Eph, What a cute way

Hi Eph, What a cute way to leave a reply. Grass indeed, me thinks you're high! Thanks for the visit and the smile. Once again thank you for your other words of support as well. Sue
jetz

jetz

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Licia, Once again I

Hi Licia, Once again I thank you for your kind words. I'm not a fan of the stars, but humbled that you gave me bonus ones. Maybe I should write more like this one!! Thanks again. Sue
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Sue

This piece reached out and grabbed me with the first line. I'm a big daydreamer too. Your memories remind me of my own, so far away and so long ago... You are a brilliant writer and know how to blend present with past. You do it with such wonderful ease. Always, Cat
jetz

jetz

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Cat, Wow. Your response

Hi Cat, Wow. Your response blew me away. I truly thank you for the comments you left. I was in need of a boost, and you, dear Cat, gave me that boost. Thank you !! Sue
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hippiepoet69

16 years 2 months ago

I love it.

If you bend the blade when you hit a rock. It will really bring back memories. Get your mind out of the gutter. I mean the vibes of the Harley. Take Care. huey
jetz

jetz

16 years 2 months ago

hehehe, Mind outta the

hehehe, Mind outta the gutter!! Sure, like THAT'S gonna happen.. You need not tell me of the vibes from a Harley!! Thanks Huey. You make me smile. Sue